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Writing for Authors
15 Dec 2020 at 02:39 PM PST
Updated 3 months ago

Using Strong Verbs in Your Writing

By Catia Shattuck

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Using strong verbs can help you fulfill that adage of “show, don’t tell.” Here are several ways you can switch out weak verbs for strong verbs.

Change Adjective + Verb Pairs into Strong Verbs

Rather than trying to make a verb more powerful by adding an adjective, keep an eye out for places where you can instead replace the adjective and verb with a stronger verb.

Here are some examples:

  • walked strongly -> strode
  • ate hungrily -> gobbled, devoured, scarfed
  • secretly listened -> eavesdropped
  • looked angrily -> glared
  • slept lightly -> dozed
  • echoed loudly -> reverberated
  • ran quickly -> dashed, rushed, sprinted

Replace Weak Verbs with Strong Verbs

Strong verbs help the reader see the action taking place in your story, while weak verbs don’t have that power.

Replace “Be” Verbs

Weak verbs include “be” verbs: am, is, are, was, were, be, being, and been. Sometimes a “be” verb is exactly what your sentence needs, but you can often replace it with a stronger verb that makes the whole sentence better.

  • Weak Verb: The food was so good. -> The food tasted so good.
  • Wordy Construction: She is the teacher of the fourth graders. -> She teaches fourth grade.
  • -ing Construction: They chattered excitedly as they were coming home from soccer practice. -> They chattered excitedly as they came home from soccer practice.
  • Passive Voice: He is being interrogated. -> They interrogated him.
  • Nominalization: It is my intention to call her today. -> I intend to call her today.

Replace Other Abstract Verbs

Here are some more abstract verbs that don’t evoke an image when read; they can be replaced with stronger verbs as well.

  • provide: “He provided information” versus “He shouted the information” or “He scribbled the information on a notepad.”
  • add: “‘I think so,’ she added” versus “‘I think so,’ she quipped” or “‘I think so,’ she ground out through gritted teeth.”
  • go/went: “She went outside” versus “She ran outside” or “She darted outside” or “She shuffled outside” or “She danced out the door.”
  • put: “She put the book down” versus “She threw the book down” or “She tossed the book aside” or “She positioned the book on the desk” or “She placed the book on the desk.”
  • sit: “She sat in the chair” versus “She slouched in the chair” or “She dropped into the chair” or “She perched on the chair.”

How do you replace weak verbs with strong verbs in your writing? We’d love to hear in the comments below!

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I am a copyeditor and a typesetter of print books, and have been editing and typesetting (using InDesign) for twelve years. As the executive editor at Book Cave, I enjoy helping authors be successful, and I only get interrupted a little bit (ha!) by my cute, rambunctious one-year-old.


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