Cold Comfort

Overall, the plot is exciting but the grammatical errors and typos are excessive. I don't want my grammar/spelling to get worse the more I read. The plot made me want to keep reading, but the author's bizarre use of question marks became very distracting. Many sentences ended in question marks that should have been periods, and it became difficult/obnoxious to read. There are also many typos and grammatical errors throughout. For example, the author would write "they would try and find out what was going on tomorrow," rather than "they would try to find out what was going on tomorrow." They are not trying AND finding out, they are trying TO find out! I found myself "grading" the mistakes in my head while reading, and I am not a teacher etc.! The author desperately needs to hire an editor. Update: I finished the entire book and really enjoyed the plot and how fast-paced it was! The characters are also pretty realistic and likable. 2/5 for question marks/grammar (sorry!) 4.5/5 story!

It was the first book I've read written by Trevor Douglas, but it certainly won't be the last. A rivetting story full of intrigue but also kindness and support for the main character. Well written and easy to read

The storyline was good, but the feel was a bit sterile. And Trevor, PLEASE research the uses of question marks in grammar. You seem to have absolutely no concept of their uses. You have a reckless love affair with them, as it stands.