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Once When We Were Human Kindle Edition
- LanguageEnglish
- PublisherSwainwright
- Publication dateNovember 28, 2016
- File size739 KB
Product details
- ASIN : B09TSV78NX
- Publisher : Swainwright (November 28, 2016)
- Publication date : November 28, 2016
- Language : English
- File size : 739 KB
- Text-to-Speech : Enabled
- Screen Reader : Supported
- Enhanced typesetting : Enabled
- X-Ray : Not Enabled
- Word Wise : Enabled
- Sticky notes : On Kindle Scribe
- Print length : 65 pages
- Best Sellers Rank: #3,328,093 in Kindle Store (See Top 100 in Kindle Store)
- #9,631 in Two-Hour Science Fiction & Fantasy Short Reads
- #36,792 in Two-Hour Literature & Fiction Short Reads
- #38,254 in Fiction Classics
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There are only so many times one man can say reboot when it comes to I.T. That's when I decided to change the career and do a BA Hon's in Creative and Professional Writing, and I'm still struggling.
At Uni I had the chance to cut my teeth with established luminaries and write some fiction which I insisted on calling a collection of short-stories and have published them on Amazon. My Mum is thrilled but then she is thrilled every time I visit her.
I have travelled widely to India, Nepal, Egypt and lived in Beijing, Prague and Holland. I enjoy meditating, writing, hill-walking and watching movies.
I enjoy writing short stories, memoir, YA novels and short fiction. I admire Stephen King, George Orwell, Bukowski, and James Herbert. My next attempt will be horror.
Please purchase my books. Offer insights or insults I don't care and fund my mad adventure into the literary unknown.
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Once you trade out the people listed in the above poem with dogs and the Nazis with wolves, you have the core of this novel in all its damning glory as it explores the hard truths of fascism and unchecked totalitarianism through the eyes of a dog who spends each day hiding from the reality of his life. Keep your head down, ignore what happens to the neighbors, as long as you have food in your belly and a home, what does it matter if you have to give up a little bit more freedom or privacy? Sure, each day a little more of your life is gone as the noose slowly tightens around your neck, but if you just shut up and follow the rules, everything will be okay, right?
Of course, history has taught that it is never okay. If you don’t fight now, you will have to fight later, when things have become all the more desperate. While the author, David Swan, does his best to express these thoughts within his story, the message is hampered quite a bit rough writing, numerous grammatical errors, and generally unlikable characters. Unwieldy, but with a core message that rings as true as a bell, “Once When We Were Human” is a tale that is only saved from utter mediocrity by its timely central theme.
But regardless, this story touches my heart in so many ways. The author writes the characters that once were human and now turned into dogs and wolves because the crazy things they have done. The sentence of ‘some had said it was Gods retribution, others say natures revenge for messing with the DNA, surely send me some chills. It shows how far away the modernization has taken place in their setting until they have changed into something else, something that is not even human.
I find that the plot of the story is really strong, the author knows what he writes about even when I have a really hard time to connect with the characters, I still enjoy reading it because I want to know what happened next. The pace of this book is consistent and the author provides enough backstory about the characters despite how short the book is. Our male lead character, Justin is someone that is not even bothered by the ruling of the Wolves but it all changed when his wife, Karen got into jail for protesting. He starts to be friends with the artistic Karl and Joe the Jew to save his wife, I found it really intriguing to see how Justin changes his principles of life in this short book; it shows that he really cares about his wife even when they are different on so many levels. As for the ending, I really glad it turns out to be that way, not like I even expecting it but it is definitely a good surprise!
I didn’t really like the main character. He was so apathetic throughout the entire book until the end that it was just annoying. I have a suspicion that that was the author’s intention. He wanted to show how apathy can affect us and society.
The book had a lot of errors. Commas in the wrong spots, misspelled words, and incomplete sentences on every page. It was annoying because I had to go back and reread the sentences to make sure I was understanding what the author was saying.
In a homage to Brave New World, 1984, and Animal Farm, David Peter Swan’s story, Once When We Were Human, explores a topic that has been explored in many forms, although maybe not ever with dogs. Any of these books are important to read, and it humbles you to the human condition. Do not be complacent; complacency means you have lost your humanity.
While this message is always a strong one, the story could have been better executed. I kept forgetting I was reading about actual dogs (with words switching between paws and hands, and struggling to get on stools to sitting on a bench). Perhaps that was the point though; in this scenario, although they are dogs (that were once human), they are no different from us.
While there is nothing revolutionary about this story, it is always important to reexamine our part as humans. Are we just obedient to the prying wolves…or are we ready to fight for what we believe?
I guess that’s your decision to make.